I need a critique for my etsy store about prices, photos, descriptions, tags, etc. Thanks

Sorry I thought clicking in my name you can see it.

https://www.etsy.com/es/shop/bisuteriawithlove?ref=hdr_shop_menu

Hi Sonia,

thanks for providing the link to your shop. Your product photos are very decent and I as a visitor had good impression about your shop. I'd suggest to replace your "About" section photo with sharper one (to be consistent with quality of your products photos).

As for specific products - you might want to come up with more keywords for your products. For example, for https://www.etsy.com/listing/532306031/tutorial-for-making-bag-candy-school you could add "DIY candy bag", "instant download" instead of "download instant". I understand that English is not your native language, however investing time into your product titles (SEO) might make a difference. Take a look at Keywrod tool - https://seller-tools.com/seo/etsy/keyword-tool/ which might be exactly what you need.

One more item to correct - some of your FAQ titles are still in Spanish.

I hope this helps.